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DoctorWho20in20 Round 44 entry - Tenth Doctor/David Tennant

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Constructive criticism is welcome!


themes


bw + colour blue crossover faceless negative space
outside plus one smile sitting tiny text


category - one image


category #1 category #2 category #3 category #4 category #5


artist's choice


ac #1 ac #2 ac #3 ac #4 ac #5


Comments

Oooh, you have an eye for cropping! I particularly like bw + colour, negative space, category #4 & #5 and ac#3 (this one has great colours!).

And since you asked for concrit: some, like outside, ac1 and cat#1-3 could use a bit of sharpening to give the eye something to focus on. With others, like the negative space one you coud try sharpening just the left side of the Doctor, just to draw the eye a bit more and underline the effect of the empty space.

You might also want to try and experiment with colour adjustment a bit more. Your icons are all well-lit but a lot are also very brown. Yet, the good job you do with lighting some of these icons practically invites experimenting with vibrant colours (like ac#5 for example, or heck, the complete second row is perfect for going just that one step farther as they have already good contrast!). A little more saturation here and there might make the splashes of colour stand out more and, again, draw the eye better.
Thank you so much!

Color adjustment was one thing I wasn't quite fully satisfied about. Partly because of the sources, but partly because I was using Pixlr and not Photoshop. I think I'm going to stick with Photoshop in the future.

Thank you. I will keep your concrit in mind for the next round!
Very nice. I especially like outside, plus one, smile, AC1, and AC2.
Lovely!

My favourites are negative space, sitting, ac#3 and ac#5 :)
Thank you!!